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Making a Mark Author: Fidelis Blue
(Added on Oct 2, 2003) (This month 49533 readers) (Total 54598 readers)
Having joined a secret BDSM society, Anna finds the marks of a beating threaten a new relationship.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: drayman (Edit) Rating: Oct 26, 2003
The anonymity of the group, the simple summoning of the subject, the execution of the ordeal and the talents of a writer with such a command of the written word, gave me great enjoyment. I have admired the writing style of Fidelis in the past, but this is the first time I have been moved to send a review. (9/10)
Replied by: fidelis (Edit) (Oct 26, 2003)
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like Under My Thumb, which I'm continuing to add to.

Reviewer: Moggy (Edit) Rating: Oct 25, 2003
I read it. I enjoyed it. Now I'm reviewing it. This is cool, classy BDSM erotica in my view.
However I must agree with Lex on his point about the ending. It left me confused as to whether it is the end of a chapter or a short story, and hence detracted a little from my enjoyment :-( (8/10)
Replied by: fidelis (Edit) (Oct 25, 2003)
well, cool and classy is a real compliment. Sometimes I like to leave things open. Maybe it will continue, maybe they lived happily ever after...
Replied by: Moggy (Edit) (Nov 8, 2003)
Okay, I'm none the wiser.

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Oct 12, 2003
Antoher great story, but then again all your stories are so nicely done. Can anyone say 'FIDELIS' **smile** (8/10)

Reviewer: crickette (Edit) Rating: Oct 6, 2003
I liked Making A Mark. I liked the anonymity of the group. It made it more sensual and intense, at least to me. I look forward to reading some of your other works. (7/10)
Replied by: fidelis (Edit) (Oct 6, 2003)
Thanks for your kind words. Hope you like the other stories too.
Fidelis

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Oct 5, 2003
This one seemed to fall apart at the end. The writing is still high quality but the subject matter is no longer fresh or innovative. (7/10)

Reviewer: e.e. norcod (Edit) Rating: Oct 2, 2003
Another ten. Fidelis is developing into one of the top writers on this site. Congratulations again! (10/10)
Replied by: fidelis (Edit) (Oct 3, 2003)
Your praise is generous, and much appreciated. Thank you.

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