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The Homecoming
Author: sarijak
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(Added on Sep 5, 2003)
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Ellie swore she would never return home again, until her mother's death brings her back. It isn't long before she finds a number of very strange things about her former home town, and her sister seems involved in most of it. What can the secret be, and will Ellie survive investigating it? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Very intense, with excellent setting and descriptions.
Great job!
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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a very nice mix of everything (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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Sometimes I just don't get why some reviewers are so picky about every little mistake, while others look past errors of language and form and who knows what else.
Mainly, I thought the idea was creative, but the implementation was not up to such high ratings. The long text, unbroken by chapters or sections, made this a chore to read.
I kept at it because the story did have some mystery that hooked me, but I probably skimmed over the last third because it became somewhat predictable. What ruined it for me was the ending with the busted teeth and life in absolute ruin. I probably should have avoided it due to the "heavy" code, but my rating is mostly for the form, not the content. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Well done story with a very interesting plot. Very nice character development. Great scenes with Ellie struggling with her instructions, but unable to resist. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Oct 1, 2003 |
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I much enjoyed reading this story. It is well constructed and the animosity felt by the elder sister towards her younger sibling really comes through. The ending paragraphs give the tale a well rounded finish with ellie confined to a brothel. (9/10)
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Emily
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Sep 6, 2003 |
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Excellent! I simply loved the way our heroine is tricked and turned into a complete whore at the hands of her sister. The interesting array of mistresses makes this one particularly intertesting and diabolical. This is a very well crafted story with echoes of that "strange- silent-town scenario running in a ghost-like vision of slavery with a very un-sisterly-like passion exploding into the dark depths of a depraved mind. Nicely done! (10/10)
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