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The Homecoming Author: sarijak
(Added on Sep 5, 2003) (This month 21532 readers) (Total 44733 readers)
Ellie swore she would never return home again, until her mother's death brings her back. It isn't long before she finds a number of very strange things about her former home town, and her sister seems involved in most of it. What can the secret be, and will Ellie survive investigating it?

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Weighed Average (?): (9/10)
Average Rating: (9.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2009
Very intense, with excellent setting and descriptions.
Great job!
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 5, 2006
a very nice mix of everything (9/10)

Reviewer: sunburststrat (Edit) Rating: Sep 4, 2005
Sometimes I just don't get why some reviewers are so picky about every little mistake, while others look past errors of language and form and who knows what else.
Mainly, I thought the idea was creative, but the implementation was not up to such high ratings. The long text, unbroken by chapters or sections, made this a chore to read.
I kept at it because the story did have some mystery that hooked me, but I probably skimmed over the last third because it became somewhat predictable. What ruined it for me was the ending with the busted teeth and life in absolute ruin. I probably should have avoided it due to the "heavy" code, but my rating is mostly for the form, not the content. (7/10)

Reviewer: Mausferatu (Edit) Rating: Mar 19, 2004
10/10 (10/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Oct 5, 2003
Well done story with a very interesting plot. Very nice character development. Great scenes with Ellie struggling with her instructions, but unable to resist. (10/10)

Reviewer: drayman (Edit) Rating: Oct 1, 2003
I much enjoyed reading this story. It is well constructed and the animosity felt by the elder sister towards her younger sibling really comes through. The ending paragraphs give the tale a well rounded finish with ellie confined to a brothel. (9/10)

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Sep 6, 2003
Excellent! I simply loved the way our heroine is tricked and turned into a complete whore at the hands of her sister. The interesting array of mistresses makes this one particularly intertesting and diabolical. This is a very well crafted story with echoes of that "strange- silent-town scenario running in a ghost-like vision of slavery with a very un-sisterly-like passion exploding into the dark depths of a depraved mind. Nicely done! (10/10)

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