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Correction Clinic
Author: Sissy Suzi
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(Added on Aug 9, 2003)
(This month 60680 readers) (Total 80494 readers) |
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Caught masturbating at his companies clinic, Suzi is sent to correction clinic. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
pet10
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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IT is a happy thout I like it an idea is most important that grammar (8/10)
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le forgeron
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Aug 12, 2003 |
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There is a need to work on the form and grammar,
as well as the story itself, including the motivation of the narrator which isn't stressed enough to my taste.
The actions might also be described more slowly, and in the right order. (3/10)
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lex ludite
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Aug 11, 2003 |
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This story has good potential; the stage seems to be set for some interesting and quite humiliating events, as it should be. Try editing out the editorial comments and the author's notes, they get in the way of progress.Looking forward to the next chapter. My rating is only a "preliminary assessment" based on these early chapters. (6/10)
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Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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Content struggle, but the humiliation is delicious! (8/10)
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abitbent
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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I got about half way and had to stop. The grammar is very sub par and as soon as I read "stepped back to admire her handiwork", I rolled my eyes and shook my head. (3/10)
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