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Women's Experimental Section
Author: Mistress Cyn
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(Added on Jul 24, 2003)
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This is a short story about a women's experimental section in a Nazi camp. It involves Herr Dr. Krahm, his two assistants, and an unwilling patient who enjoys his ministrations. If you love medical fetish this story is for you. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
baerchen24
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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I loved this story...short sweet....lets see some more!!! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 21, 2004 |
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I just changed my ratong on Janets ordeal from a 10 to a 2, based on the theme of Nazi Germany, altho i like the concepts of the story, the fact that the Nazi's were involved, made me alter my rating to a 2, thank you for reeeminding me about janet, you are correct it does not dserve anything rating at all, much less my 10
Why do writers need to continue writing on the atrocities the Nazi's commited against people, The world knows what they did, hardly a story for erotica I wish everyone would leave the subject of Nazi's alone (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Moggy
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Confusing. You gave another Nazi story (Janet) a 10.For that one you wrote: I loved the story, but any story like this I love, the genere is what I enjoy the most.
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| Reviewer:
mickni2000
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Aug 5, 2003 |
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It's certainly a well written story and I'm happy he has taken her as his personal experimental subject as this must mean you have more! I only lack something about how the woman are doing during this 'nice' and 'kind' treatment. I don't think she is feeling happy...smile (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mistresscyn
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2003)
- I am really glad you liked this story. I do intend to write more like this. I certainly enjoyed writing about the 'nice' and 'kind' treatment the patient was receiving.
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| Reviewer:
cph1111
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Jul 30, 2003 |
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OK, Nazi stories aren't politicaly corect, but its the contant that counts. I havent been excited like this in a long time, any one can torture a pussy......but saline in a tube in my belly?? WOW. And not just catheters, but going into her bladder, I never felt so violated!! and I was just reading. I hope you continue
You have an "over the edge" imagination that is very exciting.
thanks (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mistresscyn
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2003)
- Thanks for the great review and I am so glad you enjoyed my short story. I will definitely continue this story!
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le forgeron
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Jul 30, 2003 |
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The 'Nazi'/Uniform part disappears too quickly.
It could as well happen in a classical medical scene.
If it was a summary, it has some good ideas but they
need more development. In particular, the description of the patient position is given AFTER the action, which is rather counterproductive.
There is also a need to have more feeling expressed. So far, it just sounds like the report made by a policeman who would have look at a camera record of the scenes.
Allowing the reader to project itself into one of the character, along with more details and lengthier description (so that the reader has time
to 'feel' too, with increasing stress!) would be far better.
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Jul 28, 2003 |
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"She was just a subject to these people and
she liked it. She yearned for this exam."
What's the point of the Nazi setting if the victim is looking forward to her ordeal? The whole Nazi thing implies something less than enthusiasm on the part of the victim.
Although the patient is just a subject to the doctor, it would be nice if she was something more than that to the reader. We don't get a name or even much in the way of her reactions to what is being done to her. This deprives the story of interest and keeps the reader at a distance.
The writing is probably better than average, although there are some errors in punctuation and the dialog (sic) is a bit stilted.
One other minor quibble--saline did not come in bags during the Nazi era. They used bottles. (4/10)
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redEva
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Jul 26, 2003 |
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Not badly written but lacks plot. The Nazy torture could have been much better described, I seriously doubt tortures were interested in bringing their subjects to orgasm. Could be much more intense. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
greenhornt
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Jul 25, 2003 |
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The plot is not very believable. The dialog sucks. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
mistresscyn
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2003)
- Don't criticize other people's writing if you can't spell. Dialogue is spelled wrong. You forgot the ue.
The plot is very believable. It is FANTASY dickhead.
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Moggy
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2003)
- Dialog is a US variant spelling of dialogue.
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Jonathan
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2003)
- Should be:
"It is FANTASY, dickhead."
Direct address requires a comma.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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Nazi stories and experimental stuff like this always turn me off, but this was well written! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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Nice. As the synopsis says, it will appeal to medical fetish lovers with its various paraphenalia.
Suggestions: The Nazi thing wasn't particularly well developed. The author could have built up a little more atmosphere at the beginning without unduly testing the reader's patience. The ending is abrupt and cliched, a familiar problem on this site. (6/10)
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