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Piece of Meat Author: Miss Suki
(Added on Jul 17, 2003) (This month 51119 readers) (Total 67133 readers)
A girl is used for no other pleasure except her Master's.

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Weighed Average (?): (5/10)
Average Rating: (5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 11, 2004
had great potential, the key word here is HAD (5/10)

Reviewer: gojack10 (Edit) Rating: Apr 9, 2004
A used 'piece of meat', or an undercooked hamburger? (2/10)

Reviewer: boccaccio2000g (Edit) Rating: Jul 19, 2003
The story is strikingly intense and imaginative, but could be improved in several ways. First, a pet peeve of mine, most of the paragraphs are over-long. More importantly, though, is that successful erotica should stimulate the visual and tactile senses of the reader as well as his/her imagination. This story succeeds in stimulating the imagination, but does not help the reader to visualize the scene. Perhaps I read it too quickly, but I did not get a strong sense of what the characters look like. This is not always terribly important in vanilla fiction, but in erotica, I think it is quite important indeed. What is it about these two individuals that attracted them to each other? That said, I think this author has the talent to do some really good work. Keep an eye on her. (5/10)

Reviewer: kittenfemme (Edit) Rating: Jul 18, 2003
This is a wonderfully sadistic and erotically charged story. Though I concur with Emily in that I would like to see some embellishment, I was rather wet by the time I finished reading it. Thank you. Any chance for more? (6/10)

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Jul 18, 2003
too matter-of-factly written for my tastes. (5/10)

Reviewer: don11 (Edit) Rating: Jul 17, 2003
The sense of personality justifies the action. Just. (7/10)

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