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The B&D Academy
Author: Big Bad
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(Added on Jul 2, 2003)
(This month 104074 readers) (Total 164221 readers) |
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A school for young girls and a few boys where they are trained for a lifetime of sexual slavery.Not only to their parents but some are sold at auction to other preverted people.This is a very graphic story and not for everyone. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Great story, interesting new ideas.Makes appetite to read more. Some more details here and there and You make it a perfect 10.
I for myself would like to add a little bit more restrictive devices (steel), or maybe some modification to the body, but this would be to much for the normal reader. (9/10)
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master_wolf
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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I thought this was an excelent story, well written and enjoyable. I have always enjoyed the idea of slave schools. They are right, though, that you might want to proof-read a little bit. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jan 13, 2005 |
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The prelude is going a little long, but I'm glad you've decided to continue this. Your editing seems to be getting better as you go along, too. Sounds like the next piece might be getting down to business... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snapper44
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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It could ues some spell correction, however, I can not wait to read further chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BOBBY SHEPHERD
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments and I will try very hard to make some of those corrections in upcoming chapters.I do have a spelling problem and must spend a lot time in my dictionary and Word spell.It is very hard to get everthing right with only a eighth grade education and and I have some problems with my heart and this is why it is so long between chapters.So again thanks.
BOB
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 28, 2003 |
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correct quotation and proof-read are requested, especially in the last part. There is a background which sound promising, but it need development in time, instead of inner-thought-anticipation.
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redEva
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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Very nice idea, but i have to agree with Nitrofox – some parts a bit to long and repetitive. Still looking forward to see what academy holds for the students – maybe the academy finds time and demand to provide additional training for returning students? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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This looks like it could become a great story. I don't understand the story codes, however. There were some problems with the writing, most particularly long paragraphs, and lack of quotation marks. This really needs to be proof-read. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
torny
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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Seems to be a good start to an interesting scenario. Can't wait for the next installment (5/10)
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