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The Undoing of Barbara Author: Dimitri Perdikis
(Added on May 22, 2003) (This month 72902 readers) (Total 84474 readers)
This is the story of a beautiful woman whose passionate fantasies and desires finally led to her own undoing. In my imagination and my story, Barbara looks very much like the English fashion model Liz Hurley only with a much bigger ass.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2004
it was average, could have been better, could have been alot worse (6/10)

Reviewer: tent (Edit) Rating: Jan 14, 2004
Magnifisient story. Very exciting and author shown good potential. (9/10)

Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: May 22, 2003
What really pisses me off about this story is the faulty story codes. This is a mind control, science fiction story, neither of which I care for, but that isn't reflected in the story codes. False advertising. I wish I could have rated it lower. (4/10)

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