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The Surrender of Annabelle
Author: Dimitri Perdikis
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(Added on Mar 21, 2003)
(This month 67879 readers) (Total 83834 readers) |
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This is the story of a beautiful English woman, during the Voctorian times, who's passions had more control than reason over her and which eventually led her down a path from which there is no turning back, ever. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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fully agreeing with ladys_maid (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 18, 2003 |
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The basic premise of the story is pretty far- fetched and much of the dialogue has no place in Victorian times, when the story is set. I suspect that English is not the writer's first language, as much of the dialogue is awkward and stilted - the spelling and grammar could also be improved. The actual story itself is quite exciting and erotic, but the writing deficiencies greatly detract from the reader's enjoyment. (3/10)
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