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Training
Author: Miss M
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(Added on Dec 10, 2002)
(This month 78851 readers) (Total 108743 readers) |
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A husband turns his wife into his slave and she devotes herself to him.... wanting to learn all he desires of her. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Maitre1962
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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This is a nice story.
I would suggest though,that you find your self a proof reader to correct all the punctuation problems (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 23, 2004 |
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the primary reason for the review is the PARAGRAPHS ARE WAY TO LONG RE EDIT THEM AND I WILL RE REVIEW THE STORY (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
csr
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Nov 26, 2004 |
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"yes, Pat... I'd like to buy a carriage return"
Can't review story-- won't read a story with paragraphs that long. (3/10)
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Moggy
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Jun 3, 2003 |
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"W/we will practice,... practice until you cannot take anymore and then W/we will go to bed"
It's bad enough when people write like this in the forum but characters speaking this way in a story is ludicrous. Sorry, but it just makes your work harder to read and less enjoyable, so why do it? (3/10)
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