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House Invader
Author: Mark
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(Added on Nov 20, 2002)
(This month 50974 readers) (Total 68662 readers) |
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Alone in her house, a young mother-to-be gets an unplanned visitor. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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another good read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Nov 25, 2002 |
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Not a bad concept, but needs some work on execution. Please get someone with good English skills to proofread your work. (3/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 23, 2002 |
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Sorry, but couldn't make it past the first paragraph. Major problems with syntax and diction. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Nov 23, 2002 |
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This was an ok story. It was lacking in that it was far too short, and it didn't really grasp my attention. Perhaps a bit longer, and a bit more involved, and it would be great. (7/10)
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