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Punishment Camp
Author: katie lynch
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(Added on Oct 11, 2002)
(This month 160670 readers) (Total 212600 readers) |
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Eloise pays a terrible price for a crime she didn't commit. Forced to serve a harsh prison sentence in complete nudity while forced by the guards into hard labor. Who could survive? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Oct 12, 2002 |
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I think both prior reviewers are right; the story is somewhat repetitive, and rather lacking in erotic content early on. But, and this is a big but, rarely does one empathize with a character in a story as one does here with Elinor -- that kept me turning the pages through some very grim chapters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mskneeler
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Oct 11, 2002 |
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Thank you ever so much for being one of the very few authors that still does produce F/F stories! As a lesbian, but being immensely into the submissive side of BDSM, I thoroughly enjoy stories with the above scenarios but it becomes SO terribly disappointing to forever see them with the male dominating/torturing the female! Isn't there quite enough of that type thing in the real, everyday life we now exist in without having to read more of it whenever you choose to do some exciting reading???
If you ever take suggestions for themes, I thrive on reading F/F stories in which one woman totally controls another and takes extreme delight in keeping her at a feverish pitch of sexual excitemnet through immense teasing, but hardly ever allowing her to reach a climax! This to me, is extremely spellbinding in content!
Fondly,
neenee (Janeen Marie O'Brien)
binkyboom@hotmail.com (10/10)
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dom19_n
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Oct 11, 2002 |
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The first half is too relentlessly depressing for my taste, with no sex at all (just nudity and hard labor); and also is far too repetitive, probably a result of having multiple authors. Would benefit from hard-nosed editing. (5/10)
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