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Ebb Tide
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Sep 6, 2002)
(This month 22573 readers) (Total 33572 readers) |
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A young punk girl sets off for a fun day at the seaside arcades. Unfortunately the lift she gets takes her to a rather dull (for her) yachting resort. She steals a small boat and with her lack of skills does a considerable amount of damage to an expensive large yacht. The owner demands payment in a painful way. The owner of the stolen small craft also demands his payment in services too. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
greenhornt
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Sep 7, 2002 |
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The ending is way off. The story started interesting but really did not go anywhere. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Beethovenfan
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Sep 7, 2002 |
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Obohobo has a talent for the short story, and has used a remarkable variety of settings in the stories posted to this site. This particularly story (which the synopsis accurately describes) is rich in detail and absorbing, although you'll have to be patient if you are looking for the BDSM content!
Once again, as in a previous review of one of his stories, I'll complain at the general lack of BDSM 'heat'. Nonetheless I will happily commend it to any reader that enjoys fiction that goes beyond the usual scope of postings on this site. (9/10)
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