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    Tormented
    
    Author: syndie
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    (Added on Jul 15, 2002)
            (This month 48861 readers) (Total 54131 readers) | 
   
   
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    she is haunted by her Master's presence. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    ladys_maid
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    May 16, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Mildly entertaining but it somehow read to me more like a diary entry than a story. It is nicely written but ultimately unsatisfying. (5/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Tim_Id
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    Jul 19, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I like Syndie's writing style, except all the uppercase He, Him, and Master is a bit distracting. I keep thinking she is fucking Jesus Christ. (7/10) 
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