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Welcome to the Show
Author: Darkroom
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(Added on Aug 23, 2014)
(This month 132043 readers) (Total 132043 readers) |
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Deep underground, three unlucky tourists are unwillingly presented before the cameras, where they suffer unimaginable tortures to the delight of those who paid to attend the show. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
FryingScot
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Dec 25, 2014 |
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An interesting story that has potential in the other chapters. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 22, 2014 |
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Well-written, but flat, two-dimensional tale aimed at describing nasty things done by non-descript brutes to a bunch of non-descript women for the pleasure of a non-descript audience. No setting, no backdrop, no motivation, no nothing; hence no story. JJ (4/10)
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Reviewer:
darkroom
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Oct 21, 2014 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />Thanks JW459. Any ideas on future chapters? There's two other tourists awaiting their turn in this story. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
JW459
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Sep 30, 2014 |
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Wonderful. Cannot wait for further chapters. My wife is Sandra and this could have been her at 22. (9/10)
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