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Soccer Moms
Author: ninja5
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(Added on Jul 29, 2012)
(This month 28521 readers) (Total 44130 readers) |
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After their daughters loose a Soccer game, a group of Mums must face the reality that one of them has to be the winning teams celebratory dinner. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 5, 2012 |
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Much better than your Christmas story. It's more than a little erotic a fairly well written. You really should find a proofreader, though. You have misspelled words, words dropped out of sentences, etc. It also would've been polite to mention your inspiration for this story, since it seems to derive from a Rebecca black&white drawing. (8/10)
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