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The new family slave
Author: Hawksub
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(Added on Jul 21, 2012)
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Shelly decides to enslave her Aunts ex-husband, and her aunt is all for it! |
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| Reviewer:
subrob99
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Jul 27, 2012 |
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Really good story hope their will be a part 2 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SissyCuckFellatrix
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Jul 26, 2012 |
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What a fun story! The long term potential for this tale is huge. In the short term it's utterly breathtaking. Some of us are twisted enough to WANT all the wicked things that happen in this story to happen to us all in the same night. It's an amusing read that moves too quickly through a wannabe slave's unexpected enslavement and subsequent training. The writer has a vivid and delicious imagination and his words read well. On the other hand, you just can't discover, enslave, and train a fellow in cocksucking, anal rape and toilet servitude in 1000 words on a couple of hours on the average Tuesday night. I look forward to seeing this story developed into a much longer, more detailed and perverse saga. (8/10)
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