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katie's punishment Author: Maso Mark
(Added on Jul 4, 2012) (This month 31498 readers) (Total 54534 readers)
little fuck slut steals some shit from my apartment, now its time for her punishment

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Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: Jorgy444 (Edit) Rating: Jul 21, 2012
No substance, where is part 1? (3/10)

Reviewer: Venom (Edit) Rating: Jul 8, 2012
Actually, I can see Lisa's point. The story -- or part of which -- is quite short and run-of-the-mill.
That the first part is missing, though, is perhaps just an upload issue. It should not happen, but it always can. (6/10)

Reviewer: Lisa Jones (Edit) Rating: Jul 7, 2012
Why only five stars? Well, I'd ask why only 6,000 characters - the minimum is supposed to be 10,000. And where's part 1?
Come on, this is half finished. Maybe there was some technical glitch, in which case I hope it's sorted out soonest. When there's more to go on then the rating may well change. (5/10)
Replied by: Major Littmann (Edit) (Jul 7, 2012)
Somewhat harsh my dear Lisa.
Replied by: Lisa Jones (Edit) (Jul 8, 2012)
Five stars is 'OK, but has some promise. The author could improve it' which, to my mind, exactly describes what we have here.
Once there is a story to judge then I can judge it properly - and it may well earn more stars.

Reviewer: Major Littmann (Edit) Rating: Jul 6, 2012
It seems strange to start on part 2 and paragraaphs etc would have been nice and it was somewhat short but it was very good! (9/10)

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