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Slave Training for Kate
Author: HIdden Pleasures
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(Added on Jan 9, 2011)
(This month 33721 readers) (Total 59937 readers) |
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A young woman experiences a dramatic change in her lifestyle after hooking up with her new lover. She finds it to be so humiliating yet so exciting at the same time. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jan 30, 2011 |
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CHAPTERS 1 & 2:
I like this story especially for its pace. The story allows us time to get to know the two characters and especially Kates thoughts.
I look forward to reading more about these two delightful characters (it would be nice to know more about the young Mistress, where did she get her training/experiances). (9/10)
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jkim
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Jan 29, 2011 |
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Fairly standard, but a good start. Flows well and the author seems intent on emphasizing humiliation, which is everything in these stories. The action must go beyond the two of them, or the story will die in 6 or 7 chapters. (8/10)
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Ares_V
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Jan 16, 2011 |
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Excellent start, I am looking forward to the story continuing. Keep your focus to the details and I am sure this will be a 9 or 10 story overall.
Regards,
A
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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Jan 13, 2011 |
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Great story, I hope it goes on for a long time. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
foxeye1
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Jan 12, 2011 |
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I believe this story shows considerable merit and a promising start has been made. It flows well with a good use of language and pronunciation. The author has not 'rushed' to get to the action but has allowed the story to build nicely.
I hope you continue with this story and I look forward to reading further chapters in due course. This appears to be your first story on this site, and if indeed it is your first attempt at writing a story, congratulations to you, it bodes well for the future. Thank you (8/10)
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Major Littmann
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Jan 9, 2011 |
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A standard slave story which therefore relies on clever writing and especially dialogue if it is to work,and while its worth reading and pleasant enough the speeches are more Shapespearian than conversational and usual complaint, it's not obvious who is speaking, but that said, it's good. (7/10)
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