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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (5/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Aug 6, 2008 |
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as mentioned the story needs soe work on punctuation ect which makes the story more difficult to read (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
(Edit) |
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Aug 6, 2008 |
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Paragraphs, quotation marks, proper punctuation and grammar are needed. I could hardly make it through the first half of the story although it seems like it is a good idea. (3/10)
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