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Faye
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 19, 2007)
(This month 23070 readers) (Total 41409 readers) |
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inspired by Faye Kane, this is the story of a slave sold to a cannibal community |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
Clevernick
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Aug 27, 2007 |
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Faye Kane would probably like this, but all I can say is "blech." I am at a loss to understand who would find this story erotic, and I'd be very disturbed to meet anyone who did. But we're not supposed to rate on that.
Yes I read the story codes, and knew what to expect. But even Faye herself manages to make her descriptions of being cut up and eaten somewhat erotic. You just turn it into a grisly barbecue.
Spelling and grammar are okay. Style is rather wooden, and without enough details to involve the reader. It feels more like someone describing how a story will go than actually telling one.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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Aug 20, 2007 |
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Although the theme of the story has been told many times, I think you have found an interesting set of points of view. I enjoyed the story and hope to read more from you. (8/10)
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