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Sub Get\'s An Award
Author: Little One
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(Added on Sep 15, 2006)
(This month 7663 readers) (Total 11976 readers) |
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Sub is rewarded after a job done well |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Sep 24, 2006 |
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"OK, but as some promise, the author could improve it" is a good description. The pronouns and capitalization had me so distracted that I missed the story. It ended with she was gone. I never realized she was there. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
elikat
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Decent story but the over use of personal pronouns was a distraction especially because of the emphasis with the capitalizations. Looking forward to reading more. (6/10)
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