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Mary Had A Little Lamb Author: Dr Charles Forbin
(Added on Jun 20, 2006) (This month 10136 readers) (Total 21181 readers)
Michael makes a bad joke ..and is sheepishly tormented for it

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Average Rating: (5/10)
Highest Rating: (6/10)
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Reviewer: abitbent (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2006
The writing itself was ok, the characters developed fine. My score reflects what was submitted, and since the rest of the storyline is only available at another website, it's incomplete in my opinion. Post the whole story, get a better grade. (4/10)
Replied by: DrForbin (Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
That WAS the whole story .... just an odd incident in the relationship with the Mistress
The base story line is available here ... look for How I became a Servant of Ay'esha
DrF

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2006
not bad but not better than a 6 (6/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2006
I found it difficult to read and limited in story. Reason I gave a "neutral" 5 (5/10)

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