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Stewardess
Author: SoccerMomCheryl
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(Added on Mar 28, 2006)
(This month 14310 readers) (Total 34599 readers) |
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A beautiful, sexy bitchy stewardess enjoys using a middle aged business woman. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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A bit of a chopped affair this is. Chopped because of alternating too quickly between musings and dialogue. On top of that, Cheryl 'forgot' some bits of sentences or words. Probably in the heat of the moment, but it makes the read less fluent.
Nevertheless a good story --one which i like a lot too. Just too bad that the dialogue wasn't richer, giving more details about what was going on in Cosmo Girl's head, but especially in that of the Laptop Queen...
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sissychar
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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i am very impressed with your dialogue. Simply amazing pacing, relentless humiliation, and extremely erotic. Please keep writing. (9/10)
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MycroftXXXX
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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Certainly nothing terribly new, but well done. Loved the "seduction", although it is completely implausible it makes one hell of a fantasy. Considering this is a second story I see good things on the horizon. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 29, 2006 |
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they do not get much better then this (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Mar 29, 2006 |
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Beautifully written! Extremely exciting scenarios that tend to leave one breatheless! She is definitely in the class of Couture and Cowgirl and perhaps, even exceeds their literary abilities! Anxiously awaiting her next story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 29, 2006 |
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Agree with the remark of Ladykate (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ladykate
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Mar 28, 2006 |
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Cheryl writes a good story but her dom is too much of bitch for my taste. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
ms2bused
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2006)
- I think we should face facts LadyKate, that amongst exceedingly beautiful, young women today, mostly the ones that have found themselves forever pampered by those around her, that if this same woman had severe leader qualities, she might very well be this dominating, if not more so! I agree wholeheartedly with SoccerMom that a lovely spoiled woman DOES, in fact know her conquering abilities and in most cases, is not at all fearful of using them to her advantage!
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| Reviewer:
Brutus Fullman
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Mar 28, 2006 |
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SMCheryl is a competent writer with good instincts for D/s scening. However, there is nothing here we haven't seen before. With a little application of her imagination, more rewarding work is surely on the way. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
obscur
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Mar 28, 2006 |
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Perfect.... just i like story a few more long.. (9/10)
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