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Milking Factory
Author: T Bone Steak
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
(This month 37104 readers) (Total 73092 readers) |
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The year is 2025, real cows are extinct. Women, have to replace them because we need the milk. Women are treated like cows. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Evil_Master_Bjorn
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May 25, 2012 |
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I greatly enjoyed the creativity in this work! Keep it up
(8/10)
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jip
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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The story idea is good, but it could be worked out in a more sensual way (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Not sure where the plot lies in all of this or if its just meant to excite. A little bit of homework is needed as a happy, healthy cow does need to sleep. :-) (4/10)
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kemosabe
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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Not the greatest in the library but not the worst either. (4/10)
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Engineer
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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Worn-out theme, silly implementation, nothing exciting at all. But grammar and spelling are not as bad as some other reviewers indicate. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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This appears to have been written by a child. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Oden
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Grammar, spelling, and sentence structure is poor. The plot isn't very well developed. It appears to be written in haste with no real thought behind the story. (2/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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i liked the concept of the milking story, this one did nothing for me (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Travis
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Couldn't get passed the first paragraph with the terrible grammer and writing style. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Furious Angel
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2005)
- Milking and Pony Girl type stories are not usualy where my enjoyment lies, but I very much enjoyed this story. It has an freefreshing straight foward mannor. It strayed away from the tired cliches, both in plot and description of characters, I find in most stories on this site. The grammar and spelling is also a cut above a good 85% of the stories on here so I am unsure what the other reviewers problems were.
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