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Origins
Author: cadeS
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(Added on Jan 8, 2005)
(This month 11610 readers) (Total 21612 readers) |
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Emma meets Knox for the first time, a real encounter. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 26, 2005 |
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Chapter Two ushers in a very hard first beating with little aftercare. Again, I wonder, what draws her to this man, not to say stop? The plot thickens and the well written story begs for more.
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An excellent begining, well written and easy to follow. Though the author introduces this as a "real" story, it begs the question of whether or not it will slip into fantasy. So many other questions to be answered. Is this her first dom? Why does she trust him? What is going to happen next? Please keep going.
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Jan 11, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading this piece but I'm wondering if this was just the teaser. It's too short with out much development. Lots of room for plot... can't wait to see what happens next. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
PrincessKTKIA
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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Not only are the explicit parts erotic but the prose builds up the pressure, doesn't just flesh out the scene. I read every word and enjoyed it tremendously. Please continue! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mgmoore
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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Yes pray do continue.We are curious now (8/10)
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