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Office Revenge
Author: soleil
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(Added on May 31, 2003)
(This month 14379 readers) (Total 34868 readers) |
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Ricardo Diablo returns large as life and twice as evil as he organizes a party one unfortunate colleague will never forget. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 24, 2004 |
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well done, great story great theme (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2005)
- Thanks for voting and reading :)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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I liked this a lot, although I thought the final third (when the second wave of 'guests' comes in), was a little less credible than the earlier portions. And the premise *is* a little hackneyed; but your take on that hackneyed premise is as good as any I've seen, I think. Nice job. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2003)
- boccaccio,
Thanks for reading, and your feedback. Much appreciated :)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 23, 2003 |
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Pretty good Story. Loved the ending. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2003)
- Thanks for your comments, crickette :)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 3, 2003 |
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Was tempted to give this one a '10'. I usually don't like blackmail stories -- they're generally hokey and unbelievable, but this one was well reasoned. Pretty realistic and the victim's internal monologue was excellent. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2003)
- Thanks for your feedback, Curtis :)
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| Reviewer:
williampeter
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Jun 2, 2003 |
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Well written and easy toread the theme was unexpected. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2003)
- Thanks for reading, commenting and voting, williampeter :)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Jun 2, 2003 |
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Combining excellent content and excellent mechanics will get you a great review every time. Very nice work soleil, some of the best I have seen on this site. One suggestion, to get away from the cliche 'blackmail at work' scenario, make the blackmail a fiction. Instead of actual improprieties by the "victim" have Ric Diablo frame her with false documents. Increasing her own sense of helplessness and making him even a bigger bastard. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2003)
- drake7,
Thanks for reading, and for your kind words and feedback. I must admit, I had help with this story from my Dom, who may bear a passing resemblance to Diablo *grin*
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| Reviewer:
juicylips
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May 31, 2003 |
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Mmmmmm...excellent story, as per usual, soleil. Slut humiliation at it's finest. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jun 1, 2003)
- Thanks juicylips :)
I had fun with this one *grin*
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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May 31, 2003 |
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Nice story, but inwardly I hoped they would finally reconize her and degrade her to be the office slut. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (May 31, 2003)
- There's a thought!
Thanks for reading, woolfighter :)
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