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Ho!
Author: Fox
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(Added on May 8, 2003)
(This month 50674 readers) (Total 58247 readers) |
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'Tis the night before Christmas, and Santa discovers a present under the tree... a fun fantasy. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Nov 19, 2006 |
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It was very well written, and enjoyable. But the true reason I gave it an 8 is because it was an absolutely original idea. (8/10)
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J's blu
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Oct 22, 2005 |
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*claps hands laughing!* i thought it was wonderful!! this is BDSM library, and it had definite B and some very definate D.
original, well written, and really funny. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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May 18, 2003 |
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Very enjoyable. Not every work needs to be a magnum opus; I appreciate a good short story. This was short, but long enough to be memorable and interesting. (7/10)
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kittenfemme
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May 10, 2003 |
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*giggles* This is too cute! (7/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 9, 2003 |
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Poor old Santa - maybe he didn't check his list twice to see who had been naughty and nice. I'm sure we can all learn something there! The story was nice and light with a some humorous moments and it is well written but, for me, humor usually detracts from eroticism (perhaps I take eroticism too seriously!), so I did not find it particularly exciting. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (May 12, 2003)
- Thanks for the comments. I appreciate input into my writing - even the just-for-fun stories like "Ho!".
I have submitted a new story, "The Chains", which is a chapter from an upcoming novel. It may be more to your 'taste'. I look forward to your comments on "The Chains"
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