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The Way of Pryx
Author: Victor Mann
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(Added on Apr 29, 2003)
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The story of a young woman's desire for the galaxy's most patriarchal planet. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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The premise behind your story is good, but that whole leaving out letters in certain words just irritated me--half the time I could not figure out what you were talking about. You might want to run spellchecker and grammar checker, too on the next chapter. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
robert370
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Mar 28, 2004 |
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This is the second story by Mr Mann that I have read and I have enjoyed both very much.If you have written anything in addition to the 3 in the BDSM library I would like to know about them.
robert370ATshawDotca (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lm1jr
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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great start has many great ideas to work from throughly enjoyable (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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Very poor spelling and grammar makes it very hard to read. A good basic idea is hampered by a sometimes confusing plot and a very simple view of patriarchalism. (3/10)
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