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Captured!
Author: soleil
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(Added on Dec 11, 2002)
(This month 109380 readers) (Total 204643 readers) |
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Sarah and three friends are captured by a gang of thugs. Ruthless humiliation and degradation ensues, coupled with Sarah's desperate slide into submission. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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Some of the best erotic writing I have ever seen. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2005)
- This was one of the first of this genre I wrote, so I'm glad you liked it. I've given up this style of writing, perhaps I should revisit!
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| Reviewer:
kinkiminx
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Mar 31, 2005 |
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I loved this story! beautifully written, both the beginning and the middle were very erotic, though in completely different ways, but it worked well. The end made me cry though! Good storyline, and like the way you've portrayed S -mmmm.. a very attractive Master! I really enjoyed reading this one! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2005)
- Thanks, glad you liked it :)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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despite others, when i read a story and review it, i do so basedo n MY intrest in the story, the story linie, detail and evey aspect of a story, i often get critisized for my "brief reviews" but at time i feel an 9 or a 10 rating need no addtional word support, hope this makes sense to you (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2005)
- It does, and thanks for voting and commenting. Please forgive my tardy response :)
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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It has lots of one worder dialog like 'Slut', 'thug', and 'Yawn'. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2005)
- Point acknowledged! It's one of the first stories of this genre I wrote, that's my excuse :)
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| Reviewer:
Swashbuckler
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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WOW!!!
What a wonderful story. This was so wonderful adn beautifully depicted. I loed it, thank you for the effort. It was very beautiful, and highly recommendable. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2003)
- Thanks Swashbuckler, your comments and vote are appreciated :)
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BruceBoxer
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Mar 20, 2003 |
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This is tough for me--excellent quality, lot's of enthusiasm from a concerned author wanting to generate a top-shelf tale--I just didn't enjoy it. So, no rating as if a reader likes the premise, the execution was fine. Your fault Soleil--you wanted folks to read it :) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2003)
- Hi BruceBoxer, thanks for reading, voting and commenting :)
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| Reviewer:
emmaadmirer
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Jan 29, 2003 |
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Pleeease continue! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Feb 2, 2003)
- Thanks for reading and voting, emmaadmirer :) Part 7 has been submitted.
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| Reviewer:
juicylips
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Jan 28, 2003 |
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LOVED this story. Super talented writer! Keep writing...please. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2003)
- Thanks so much for reading and voting, juicylips. Part 7 coming soon :)
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| Reviewer:
Crynthia2
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Jan 28, 2003 |
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I love this story and the type of Master sir is.
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2003)
- Thanks so much for reading and voting, Crynthia2 :) S is modelled on my Master, who is my inspiration and, in my opinion, simply the best thing on the planet.
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Silenteyes
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Jan 15, 2003 |
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A part of me knew that she would go with S. She mentions that if she goes with him, she would have a better chance at escape, maybe, but I think she feels more for S then even she knows.
Great story, I hope there will be more! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2003)
- Thanks for your review, Silenteyes. I'm working on Part 5 :)
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| Reviewer:
alphie712fr
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Jan 15, 2003 |
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Too brutal for my taste but the writing is not bad. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2003)
- Thanks for reading and commenting, alphie712fr :)
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| Reviewer:
larsjewel
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Jan 12, 2003 |
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Cruel, brutal, suspenseful...when will S turn his attention to Karen? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2003)
- Thanks for your feedback, larsjewel :)Karen gets a mention in Part 4.
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| Reviewer:
Anna
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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none (6/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2003)
- Thanks for voting, Anna :)
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| Reviewer:
nikki
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Dec 12, 2002 |
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*shiver...shiver* this is a brilliant story...i love it! can't wait for more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
soleil
(Edit) (Dec 15, 2002)
- Thanks for your comments, nikki :)
Part 2 coming shortly.
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